Sunday, 26 December 2010

A Near Kiss

A near kiss

sparkles like wide-awake.
Peels soft skin off star-glittered lips
swept up in keen, tipsy sunshine.

7 comments:

  1. I really like this.

    I love reading and writing haiku. This is lovely.

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  2. so tense and smart words.
    love your style.

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  3. Very cool style - read a few of your poems - nice work lad.

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