Sunday 26 December 2010

A Near Kiss

A near kiss

sparkles like wide-awake.
Peels soft skin off star-glittered lips
swept up in keen, tipsy sunshine.
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7 comments:

  1. Mary26 December 2010 at 03:37

    I hope she DOES read it!

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  2. Anonymous3 January 2011 at 14:13

    I really like this.

    I love reading and writing haiku. This is lovely.

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  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall4 January 2011 at 16:53

    so tense and smart words.
    love your style.

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  4. Brother Ollie6 January 2011 at 22:34

    Very cool style - read a few of your poems - nice work lad.

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  5. Marian7 February 2011 at 14:52

    sigh.

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  6. Sarah4 March 2011 at 03:03

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  7. Sarah10 July 2011 at 10:42

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